Thursday, February 23, 2012

''Marlin Moore'' Why People Exercise?

Marlin Moore
English 2
Mr.Dalsis
UPSM
Why People Exercise?

Paragraph 1--the event: I walked into the Powerhouse gym and saw 30 men who were exercising.They were wearing tight shirts,gym short,and the newest gym shoes.They smelled like sweat.They sounded like grouching old men.They wanted to exercise everyday to get that Buff shape.


How do men get strong tough?

Cause Paragraph:So that they can be heather and live more longer or be stronger.And I would do research on how do men get strong bodies and tough? And this took place in Detroit Powerhouse on jefferson

After Men Exercise

Effect 1 Paragraph:After Exercising and Working out Men They begin to show their strong bodies to the girls and girls like men with strong bodies.The strong men begin to fix everything that the girls need 

What do men do with their tough bodies?

Effect 1 Paragraph:When Men work out they have tough bodies.The long term effect involves the immediate How men pick up big metals  to make them even tougher?



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